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c to i to k by ~IrishIleana:iconIrishIleana:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Haiku & Eastern


l y r I c s w h I s p e r I n g
to a v o I d not h a v I n g yet
I t was worse to love
©2009-2010 ~IrishIleana
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It's not very good, but it was releasing.

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~Mophtalie Jul 10, 2009, 5:02:54 PM
I like the way you arranged it, not sure I get it, but glad it was releasing for you. xP

--
This is how it works
You're young until you're not
You love until you don't
You try until you can't
You laugh until you cry
You cry until you laugh
And everyone must breathe
Until their dying breath

[[Regina Spektor]]
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~IrishIleana Jul 10, 2009, 5:04:15 PM
^_^ Thanks for the read and comment.

--
"There is only one page left to write on. I will fill it with words of only one syllable.
I love. I have loved. I will love."
I Capture the Castle
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~Mophtalie Jul 10, 2009, 5:06:58 PM
You're welcome. :}

--
This is how it works
You're young until you're not
You love until you don't
You try until you can't
You laugh until you cry
You cry until you laugh
And everyone must breathe
Until their dying breath

[[Regina Spektor]]
:icongigolove07:
~GigoLove07 Jul 10, 2009, 6:32:01 PM
I like it. Short, but I like the way it's put ^.^
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~IrishIleana Jul 10, 2009, 7:31:54 PM
Haiku is the BOMB.

--
"There is only one page left to write on. I will fill it with words of only one syllable.
I love. I have loved. I will love."
I Capture the Castle
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